A forest surrounded the lake.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

A forest surrounded the lake that was in the middle of the trees.
A forest of trees sat in a circle around the round lake in the center.
A thick forest of scratchy pines surrounded the crystal clear lake.
A green forest went around a lake in the middle that was blue.

Respuesta :

The third one is the most descriptive, and uses tactile imagery in addition to visual.

Answer:

c

Explanation: