. Sally has to write a 500-word argumentative essay. She enjoys reading the newspaper, but reads most of her news on the Internet. She decides that she wants to write about how reading on the Internet should replace reading newspapers. She decides that her thesis statement will be "Reading on the Internet should replace reading newspapers because it costs less, it uses fewer natural resources, and it can reach a larger audience." Which of these comments will Sally's teacher probably make about the thesis statement?

Respuesta :

The teacher will probably make a statement on how to make the thesis statement shorter. like instead of saying “ reading on the internet should replace reading newspapers because..” it could be “ news on the internet should replace newspapers because .. “ & so on